Holiday Challenge

In Jackson Studio (Rm 18) we have been writing a poem called Holiday Challenge. This writing is about my holiday at Hanmer Springs. Feel free to comment on my post. I hope you enjoy it:)

Here is my Holiday Challenge.

I heard my sister screeching as she went down the extremely dark water slide.

I heard my mum calling us to eat her divine food for lunch.

I saw my Mum go in the boiling hot spa.

I felt the rain slightly touch my body, while I was walking on the damp stairs.

I felt the cold breeze sweep against me while I was eating outside the cafe.

I wondered if I could go down the slide faster than my Dad.

I wondered if I would dive in to the deep water.